Breathless the story #5

After my matriculation , when i was a student of 11th.
A girl came in my life actually she is my former classmate . Since eighth std.
Jab laga ki bichud jayengee bcz
I chooses science and she went for arts.
Then i purposed her
Oh how thats another story
One of my cousins is my best friend. He is too elder then me,
so he got the phone number of her through her fathers cellphone. . .
Awsome na.
Then he called her and said that vaibhav wannna to talk with you in an important matter . .
I called several times and cuts the phone as she picked up. After two days she just picked and told
“hey vaibhav tang mat karo bolo kya bolna hai”
I replied”haan  apko mera naam kaise malum”
She replied”janti thi tum he hoge”
Okay i said “fir to ye bhe janti hogi that i love you”
i asked for reply she asked for time to think bcz its a matter of life. .
After two days she said no.
Omay i said
Then she said are hum beat frndss rahenge na. .
after ten days she called and said
Dekho phone kyu nahe karte ho are ho are hum best frnd hain. .
I replied ap kyu nahe karti ho huhhh abhe busy hun by.
At night i got a msg that i love you. .
Fir main dumka aa gaya or mera cell phone kharab ho gaya. . Jo fir five monthes ke bad new mila tab tak bahuf kuch badal chuka tha bahut kuch. . .
Wait for next post. . .
Tillll take care see you byby
And yes for more entertainment follow me
as i said i tried to write my story many times but i think i can complete this time. . Soo be ready for my upcoming novel if everything ll be all ryt then may be last of next year. . .

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Vaibhav sagar

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33 thoughts on “Breathless the story #5

  1. Yanha dil ke raaz se parda uth sa rha h…kya baat h…keher dhaane ka iraada h…
    Ya zindgi pr jo keher dahaa h use duniya ko btaane ka iraada h…..
    Mene bhi socha h parts m story likhne ka…..
    Bt response pr depend krega….
    “Dil toot.ta h to bikhar jaata h …
    Jisse mohbbat h….
    Vo hi haal pooch le to dard nikhar kr baahar aata h…”

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    1. Suniye sirji, aap bhi bohot achha likhte ho, specially abi maine ek poem padhi thi aapki, It was just toooo good! 😊
      Aap toh bas likhna start karo, response ke liye toh hum hai hi na yaha! Hehe, aur last me jo shayari likhi hai, haa, beautiful! πŸ˜‡
      Keep writing! ✌

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      1. Apka thank u, shayad aap ΰ€¦ΰ€Ώΰ€² ΰ€•ΰ₯€ ΰ€¬ΰ€Ύΰ€€ ke baare m kehe rhi h πŸ˜€
        Mene kuch likhna shuru kiya tha, apka ek post dekha to pta chla ki jese kuch apse milti julti khaani likh rha hu,
        Stay Tuned πŸ˜‰

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      2. Hehe, haa sir ji vohi wala post! Haa please aap likhiye na, mujhe bohot pasand hai aapki writings! 😊
        Aur mera kaunsa post dekh liya aapne?

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      3. Chlo ek hint de deta hu apko…
        Kisi baat s aap frustrate thi, jiska frustration apke post me dikha, usi se juda h mera topic…
        Mujhe lgta h ki itna hint kaafi hoga.. πŸ™‚
        Isse jyada btana kanunan jurm h πŸ˜‰

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      4. Achha hint toh achha hai but mai mostly frustrated hi rehti hu! 😝
        Achha ek cheez bataao, maine vo post delete kar diya hai kya? Agar haa, toh fir mai samajh gayi kya baat kar rahe ho aap, varna fir se sochna padega! πŸ˜…

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      5. Hehe, haa bhot gussa aya mujhe, bataungi kabhi, but abi toh meko koi farak hi nai padta, mai toh bhaiya hi bolungi jo karna hai karlo! πŸ˜‹

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      6. Pata nai aap samjhe ki nai mai kis ki baat kar rahi hu, but us din meko bohott gussa aya tha! Ab kisi ko bhaiya nai bolu kabhi. 😞

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  2. Areyy waah, well done bro, abi achha likh rahe ho! So this is the second girl now? Pehle wali ka kya hua?
    Hahah! Sabse buri feeling haina jab girls best friend banne ko bolti hai! 😜
    Aur haa I’m waiting for that novel.

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